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I usually try and pick out at least one thing that could use work or would be neat tried a different way - and I really can't come up with much! If I didn't know it was a fractal I'm quite certain that's not the first thing I would've noticed. The colors seem like they're about to jump out and eat me - it may be neat to see this piece in different color schemes too, just to compare. I'm sure the particular choice of pink/purple and black/white is what makes it so intense. Definitely a good call on the transparent frame - a solid one would have been too confining yet an open frame would've lessened the intensity, I think. The thin line and the transparency work really well.
The flat swatches (which I don't think are fractals...?) help the whole main piece pop even more and they're a nice resting spot for the eye. On the one hand, I can see this on a doctor's office wall or some other public spot. On the other hand - it would be a shame to have it relegated to such a mundane location. This is an excellent piece for sure which should be enjoyed by more than just sick people. Very well done!
The flat swatches (which I don't think are fractals...?) help the whole main piece pop even more and they're a nice resting spot for the eye. On the one hand, I can see this on a doctor's office wall or some other public spot. On the other hand - it would be a shame to have it relegated to such a mundane location. This is an excellent piece for sure which should be enjoyed by more than just sick people. Very well done!
~~BW
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